Writing Poems of Praise

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Mary Oliver’s poem, “Prayer,” (from “Thirst,” 2006) speaks volumes about praise-making and poem-making.  Yes, we love the blue iris, though possibly not before it’s sent up its skinny stalks and roused our attention, before the unfurling.  But what about the weeds that grow around it, the wild artichoke, and the skunk grass?  Glittering glass in the alleyway?

Paying attention, she suggests, is the way to go.  Looking closely at what’s there.  The grimy couch somebody set out on the sidewalk.  A fallen gate.  The way fog slips down from Twin Peaks to the city below.

Form arises out of function, and a poem, if it’s going to have any life at all, will shape itself, tell us which way it wants to go.  “Patch a few words together,” Oliver says, and don’t make them grandiose, as if you’re standing on a soapbox.  Consider a whisper as opposed to a shout.

 

Via Negativa

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It’s not easy to talk about my own poetry because it generally comes from a place of not knowing.  I don’t think I’ve ever started a poem knowing where it would end up.  And although it’s true that poetry can sometimes lead to discovery, it can also lead to uncertainty, and that’s okay, too.  Uncertainty can be a door into wider awareness of the mystery that surrounds us.  Keats dubbed this state “negative capability,” the willingness to be in “uncertainties, mysteries, doubts, without any irritable reaching after fact and reason.”

It’s a condition that reminds me of the theological term, Via Negativa, which suggests that God can  never be fully known or described because the mind is unable to grasp infinitude.  So God is best approached by reflecting on what He is not.  That’s the way the thinking goes.  St. Thomas said that “to know that we do not know Him,” is the ultimate in human knowledge.  And if we look at the poetry of some of the early Christian mystics such as Hildegard of Bingen, we can find some moving examples of the Via Negativa at play.  When she writes, “The mystery of God hugs you in its all-encompassing arms,” uncertainty appears as a loving connection, a hug that can contain our fears and our losses, as well as our joys.

For me, Rilke is one of the most compelling travelers on the Via Negativa, and I think it’s because his poems reveal an intimate relationship with a personal God who encompasses knowing and not-knowing, light and dark.  “You, darkness that I come from,” he writes, “I love you more than any of the fires.”    

Here’s one more example of the Via Negativa by the Sufi poet, Rumi (1207 – 1273):

“God, whose love and joy

are present everywhere

can’t come to visit you

unless you aren’t there.”

     (trans. Stephen Mitchell)

I really like that one.  It’s not so much a description of mystery, really, as it is a reminder of the importance of getting out of our own way.

Reading & Writing Sacred Poetry

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I’m not sure exactly what sacred poetry is, but I know it isn’t always about drama, Moses on the Mountain and all that.  It’s just as often about small things — a plastic bag drifting across a parking lot or a bee caught in a spider web.  Do you remember these lines by Emily Dickinson?

“There’s a Certain slant of light

Winter Afternoons —

That oppresses, like the Heft

Of Cathedral Tunes —”

It’s the opening of one of her most effective poems, and shines a light on her inner life.  It’s about despair, a feeling she wrote about from time to time, and she doesn’t shy away from it.  Even though, for Dickinson, that slant of light brought a recognition of oppression, I suspect her poem provided a more tangible, manageable shape to it.

Besides serving as a touchstone of our inner lives, sacred poetry makes a point of gratitude, of celebration or thanksgiving.  Mary Oliver has a remarkable poem called “Gratitude” that asks eight questions.  “What did you notice?” “What did you hear” “What did you admire?” “What astonished you?” What would you like to see again?” “What was most tender?”  “What was most wonderful?” and “What did you think was happening?”  Any one of those questions is an invitation to widen our horizons and lead us to an enhanced sense of gratitude.  Used as writing prompts, they might even lead to a poem.

Here are a few lines from Oliver’s “Messenger” that identify the poet as lover, as praiser:

“My work is loving the world.

Here the sunflowers, there the hummingbird —

equal seekers of sweetness.

Here the quickening yeast; there the blue plums.

Here the clam deep in the speckled sand.”

I like this stanza by Yeats, too, from his well-known poem, “Gratitude”:

“Whatever gifts and mercies in my lot may fall

I would not measure

As worth a certain price in praise or great or small;

But take and use theme all with simple pleasure.

Western sacred poetry offers a vast resource for inspiration, with psalms and hymns, the poetry of St. Ambrose, Prudentius, St. John, Hildegard of Bingen, the two St. Theresa’s, and many more.  But there’s also a wealth of inspirational poetry in secular literature by Milton, Donne, Blake, Smart, Merton, and others.  Here are the closing lines of John Donne’s “A Hymn to God the Father”:

“I have a sin of fear, that when I have spun

My last thread, I shall perish on the shore:

But swear by thyself, that at my death thy Son

Shall shine as he shines now, and heretofore;

And having done that, thou hast done;

I fear no more.”

A common hallmark of poetry of faith is that, even while it’s focused on details, it tends to evoke the big picture.  It gives solace and can inspire us to be more fully present in the divine drama.  In “God’s Grandeur” Gerard Manly Hopkins chants:

“…all is seared with trade; bleared, smeared with toil;

And wears man’s smudge and shares man’s smell;

The soil is bare now, nor can foot feel, being shod.

And for all this nature is never spent;

There lives the dearest freshness deep down things.”

Those words were written in 1877.  A hundred and forty years later, people are still mining for that “dearest freshness.”  Who knows how long it can survive, given the toxicity that’s polluting the planet.

Sometimes poetry feels like a wise friend, like Donne, and sometimes like a mysterious stranger.  I’m thinking now of Theodore Roethke’s poem, “The Waking.”  These are the closing lines:

“…I should know,

what falls away is always.  And is near.

I wake to sleep, and take my waking slow.

I learn by going where I have to go.”

While Donne gives us the image of the full sun of day, Roethke attends here to shadows and uncertainty.  Putting one foot in front of the other, we make our way.

These opening lines from African-American poet Paul Lawrence Dunbar’s poem “Mystery” describe an existential dilemma, but there may also be a subtext about power and race, about inequality that can’t be ignored:

“I was not; now I am — a few days hence

I shall not be; I fain would look before

And after, but can neither do; some Power

Or lack of power says “no” to all I would.”

Haiku — three line exclamations that originated in Japan — flourish on bare attention and happenstance.  They can open into a sense of wonder and sometimes awe.   Here’s an example by Buson:

“A bat flits

in moonlight

above the plum blossoms.”

Another word for wonder is surprise.  Here’s an unorthodox haiku by the French poet Paul Eluard:

“The wind

undecided

rolls a cigarette in the air.”

Who ever thought of that image before?  Probably no one until Eluard.  Is it good?  I’ll leave that for you to decide.  Is it surprising?  I think so.

Attention to small things, mindfulness, gratitude, mystery, faith, and wonder.  And music.  I’m still not sure exactly what sacred poetry is, but it’s probably something that’s better left without explicit boundaries, something to be discovered — like the yellow bird that appeared a few days ago in the yard and hasn’t been seen since.